We found your resume and are very impressed! We believe you have the qualifications we’re looking for to fill our open insurance agent position.

We’re looking for candidates who are ambitious, intelligent and have a strong work ethic to join our Career Agent family. Regardless of the type of work you’ve been doing or how long you’ve been doing it for, if you’re motivated and looking to start a career with an excellent income opportunity, you might be just who we’re looking for!

Correct me if I’m wrong, but weren’t they initially ‘impressed’ by the resume. Yet, in the second bit, they don’t really care what has been done or how long it’s been done for.

Someone needs an editor.